Wednesday, January 30, 2008

Smooth-Running Water

3 Word Wednesday: Approach. Bottle. Smooth.

unbroken bottle
floats in smooth-running water
approaching rapids

10 comments:

Rose Dewy Knickers said...

I think it will make it through.

Rose

xo

The Mama Bear said...

Questioning....will the rapids be the end or just a beginning of another journey?
Very nice

pjd said...

Deep. The poem, not the water. :-)

It is interesting that using unbroken to describe the bottle would seem to imply that all bottles end up broken at some point. Definitely a loss of innocence poem if ever I saw one.

tumblewords said...

Somehow, I'm taking this personally - nice job with several interpretations and layers in the eddies.

LittleWing said...

excellent ku...the best of the best..it is a ku korect? *smiling*

Christy said...

a well painted picture

Richard said...

agree, good picture.

Edo said...
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Edo said...

...still sealed after all this time,
the message still dry inside

TC said...

I can't help but wonder if it made it.