Thursday, February 07, 2008

cold space

Sunday Scribblings' prompt: Fridge space.

cold space
here we are in cold space

glass walls on a steel grid
low-heat lighting
plastic drawers built into walls

cold space
behind an energy-efficient door

stainfree fabrics
modular open-plan
movable shelving, relocatable floors

cold space
tired of living in cold space

when i die don’t put me
in cold space

16 comments:

The Literary Prostitute said...

"movable shelving, relocatable floors"

How can such utilitarian language sound so eloquent?

Kudos, and great take on "fridge space".

Lilibeth said...

I like it, gave me the shivers. Very well written.

Redness said...

VERY GOOD ... shuddering, real, excellent! Thank YOU!

anthonynorth said...

A hot post about cold space :-)

keith hillman said...

Wonderful.

Linda Jacobs said...

So many meanings here! Very "cool" metaphor!

Gemma said...

I particularly liked the "energy efficient door".


Beautiful write!

Smiles and Light

M as in Mint said...

A cool 'build' of the prompt! :)

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Inconsequential said...

Cool.

:)

redness said...

Too Cooool! Loved this!

Heather said...

Awesome! This is cool, on so many levels. lol Great job! ;o)

Marie said...

I consistently admire your work because you do get us to think at so many levels. I'm so glad I keep coming back!

I agree, no cold place for me when I die either! Give me lots of soft, fuzzy blankets.

Cricket's Hearth said...

Very well written

tumblewords said...

Awesome! An appliance turned poetic.

LittleWing said...

great post to the prompt...