Wednesday, October 29, 2008

Sun-Bright Eye

The ocean is a sun-bright eye, blinking with raised fists of cumulus.

--for Poefusion's prompt Blinking with Fists, a book by Billy Corgan. My very first American Sentence.

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2 comments:

Michelle Johnson said...

Hello Tiel, your first American Sentence has you off to a good start. It's really good. Have a nice day.

one more believer said...

tiel, american sentence is a great form of expression... as you have outdone yrself again...lovely...