Wednesday, January 28, 2009

Ruthless Erosion

For 3 Word Wednesday: Caress. Jagged. Ruthless.

gentle ocean waves
caress jagged coastal cliffs
ruthless erosion

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9 comments:

Michelle Johnson said...

Makes one long for warmer days, the ocean and the etched cliffs. Hope all is well with you. Have a nice day.

floreta said...

i like the imagery this conjures. great use of prompt and haiku form!

Tumblewords: said...

Those words brought the same image to us. I did a very similar haiku. Nice! The picture is there.

ThomG said...

Wonderful imagery in such a tight package.

Richard said...

Amazing, you and Tumble seem to have contacted the same muse.

Fledgling Poet said...

Ahhh...thank you for helping me to visualize the beautiful ocean on this bleak winter's day. I loved the imagery this evoked!

Linda Jacobs said...

It always amazes me when someone fits the three words into a haiku so effortlessly!

I'll be posting a new prompt on TOP Saturday night.

pjd said...

I may have to stop coming here for 3WW. It is clear that you can write real haiku, unlike the lighthearted drivel I spit out. Put yours side-by-side with mine and it would be like Lawrence Olivier standing next to the Marx Brothers.

Sepiru Chris said...

I knew there had to be more haiku around!

Nice play with the words.