Wednesday, July 08, 2009

Crusades

3 Word Wednesday: Gloom. Kneel. Transparent.

crusader banners
shed gloom over kneeling ghosts
transparent victims

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9 comments:

ThomG said...

Interesting, as always. You're so adept with the haiku.

Michelle Johnson said...

Great work Tiel. Have a great day.

Linda Jacobs said...

You create quite the atmosphere in these three lines.

Fledgling Poet said...

Hauntingly good...

strattonm said...

Haiku do deep
Myriad thoughts floating
in few words

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You do so well with these. Very enjoyable.

Tumblewords: said...

True historyKu!

Greyscale Territory said...

I have this image of medieval sylphs dancing ring o ring o rosie round any banners leading out to or returning from war! Haunting!

pjd said...

I wish I could regularly pull up such richness in my 17 syllables. Another winner.

Leo said...

wonderful tercet...
a talent it is to express thought in 17 syllables. u do it well! :)