Wednesday, January 27, 2010

Shipwreck

3 Word Wednesday offers: Beacon. Grieve. Kindred.

beacons burn on shore
the kindred huddle grieving
for vanished crewmen

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11 comments:

Thom Gabrukiewicz said...

You are great in this medium.

Andy Sewina said...

Says it all! succinct!!

Angel said...

You are really good at getting the point across in so few words!

Lilibeth said...

Ah, we thought in nearly identical directions.
http://gildorianne.blogspot.com/2010/01/three-word-wednesday-haiku.html

Julie Jordan Scott said...

I can see this... love how many of us scribed haiku this week!

Jay R. Thurston said...

Nice haiku and great use of the words!

Daily Panic said...

these words have provoked shipwrecks from a lot of contributors.
good job.

Tumblewords: said...

Fine job!

J. S. Clawson said...

Awesome haiku. I'm partial to anything nautical in nature! Thanks for sharing. ;-)

Anonymous said...

I love it, and how true it is.

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Dee Martin said...

these went together so natural.