Wednesday, April 28, 2010

Purification

3 Word Wednesday: Depart. Ignite. Rotten.

rotten wood ignites
rising smoke dissolves in wind
old ghosts departing

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8 comments:

Jane Doe said...

An excellent haiku, very vivid. I can almost smell the smoke rising.

naramalone.com said...

Beautiful. A good way to excorcise the ghosts.

Thomma Lyn said...

What a beautiful haiku!

Greyscale Territory said...

The image of smoke dissolving and becoming a parallel with ghosts departing is both powerful and challenging!

Crystal Phares said...

Beautiful haiku. Powerful imagery.

Vivek said...

Three lines of such beauty!

Dee Martin said...

you are such an artist - this wonderful small poem that creates such a huge picture.

Timothy P. Remp said...

Wonderful haiku !

-Tim

http://timremp.blogspot.com/2010/04/hiram-grange-devils-dancers.html