Wednesday, April 28, 2010

Purification

3 Word Wednesday: Depart. Ignite. Rotten.

rotten wood ignites
rising smoke dissolves in wind
old ghosts departing

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8 comments:

Jane Doe said...

An excellent haiku, very vivid. I can almost smell the smoke rising.

Anonymous said...

Beautiful. A good way to excorcise the ghosts.

Thomma Lyn said...

What a beautiful haiku!

Gemma Wiseman said...

The image of smoke dissolving and becoming a parallel with ghosts departing is both powerful and challenging!

Crystal Phares said...

Beautiful haiku. Powerful imagery.

Vivekanand M said...

Three lines of such beauty!

Dee Martin said...

you are such an artist - this wonderful small poem that creates such a huge picture.

Timothy P. Remp said...

Wonderful haiku !

-Tim

http://timremp.blogspot.com/2010/04/hiram-grange-devils-dancers.html