tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post1265370910607316358..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: LaundromatTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-22690848789652847202009-09-11T12:17:45.902-07:002009-09-11T12:17:45.902-07:00"of fifty-seven unmatched socks and a duvet.
..."of fifty-seven unmatched socks and a duvet.<br />It just doesn't pay to be eccentric."<br /><br />I love this conclusion. I know this guy well. See him in the mirror...<br /><br />Wonderfully done.Markhttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-92015874143756179272009-09-08T04:57:37.078-07:002009-09-08T04:57:37.078-07:00i also like the font changes as a method of convey...i also like the font changes as a method of conveying the different sounds. it makes a great contribution!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-46200392941633284892009-09-07T11:37:35.631-07:002009-09-07T11:37:35.631-07:00this is great with all its sounds. i haven't b...this is great with all its sounds. i haven't been to a laundromat in years but still remember how it was. have a great day.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-79533365153100459762009-09-06T21:58:11.020-07:002009-09-06T21:58:11.020-07:00Reminds me of my recent laundromat experience. As ...Reminds me of my recent laundromat experience. As always, you've found the right words!<br /><br />http://writteninc.blogspot.com/2009/07/keeping-it-clean.html<br /><br />http://writteninc.blogspot.com/2009/07/thematic-photographic-60-laundry.htmlcarmilevyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00360045114379957605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-39393611090627599762009-09-04T00:00:23.894-07:002009-09-04T00:00:23.894-07:00Ya Fattah!
Would love to hear this spoken with dru...Ya Fattah!<br />Would love to hear this spoken with drums.Nano Boye Nagle - Ziji Salaamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519494353744610316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-75843317021023145132009-09-03T19:34:29.087-07:002009-09-03T19:34:29.087-07:00Clever. And it sounds right, too.Clever. And it sounds right, too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-29202745303582740762009-09-03T18:04:02.855-07:002009-09-03T18:04:02.855-07:00from Therese B. at RWP -- Delightful! Lots of onom...from Therese B. at RWP -- Delightful! Lots of onomatopoeia which you make even more expressive by varying fonts -- styles, sizes, italics, etc. Snappy ending, with double meaning of "it doesn't pay."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com