tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post1580251765894029935..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: Blue HorseTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-31016254573576398122007-11-05T14:19:00.000-08:002007-11-05T14:19:00.000-08:00'Her hooves beat a drumroll, untiringover grass th...'Her hooves beat a drumroll, untiring<BR/>over grass that is grey as the evening<BR/>over rocks that are whiter than bone'<BR/><BR/>Loved the whole poem, but those lines really set a powerful image for me.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-85439076638493991662007-11-05T13:56:00.000-08:002007-11-05T13:56:00.000-08:00I think this has become my favorite of your poems,...I think this has become my favorite of your poems, to date. You could use this as a start for my Monday Mural this week. Beautiful. Keep up the good work.<BR/><BR/>Michellepoefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-60757548166394021702007-11-05T06:38:00.000-08:002007-11-05T06:38:00.000-08:00I liked the use of color.And of course, the blue h...I liked the use of color.<BR/>And of course, the blue horse.Lisa Andelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15179973783013139285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-78134909442421942542007-11-05T02:31:00.000-08:002007-11-05T02:31:00.000-08:00gorgeous!!"Blue horse, where are you going?Deep in...gorgeous!!<BR/>"Blue horse, where are you going?<BR/>Deep in the earth where the stars sleep<BR/>drowned in the shivering wind."Rhianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17825362911575046105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-78220801529417688852007-11-04T23:55:00.000-08:002007-11-04T23:55:00.000-08:00Hello - I'm not sure I've seen you on the Poetry T...Hello - I'm not sure I've seen you on the Poetry Train before. Thanks for the intro to Poefusion - I like poetry games so might try the 5 Word Friday exercise.<BR/><BR/>I like the sound and rhythm of the last lines:<BR/><I>Deep in the earth where the stars sleep<BR/>drowned in the shivering wind.</I><BR/><BR/>According to Freud, dreaming of horses symbolizes the sexual drive. (surprise, surprise!)Danika Dinsmorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06472222686878922186noreply@blogger.com