tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post1897147353832675172..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: HoroscorpioTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-18683847382100850802010-06-20T19:29:26.050-07:002010-06-20T19:29:26.050-07:00Yes!Yes!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-18881467044683622342010-06-20T17:57:03.532-07:002010-06-20T17:57:03.532-07:00Nice one... pretty coolNice one... pretty coolAnya Padyamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05292308457359940182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-7948154723419110762010-06-18T15:14:51.803-07:002010-06-18T15:14:51.803-07:00Heartily agree with the other comments. This is a ...Heartily agree with the other comments. This is a dense potion.Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-55967425519091663912010-06-18T14:35:54.404-07:002010-06-18T14:35:54.404-07:00I like your title. It makes the sting of your endi...I like your title. It makes the sting of your ending work so well.Mr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-77737563770016821052010-06-18T11:18:27.884-07:002010-06-18T11:18:27.884-07:00ooh. i like how you created the image so powerfull...ooh. i like how you created the image so powerfully in a small space. and ending with the sting!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-23608158525400342392010-06-18T10:18:16.896-07:002010-06-18T10:18:16.896-07:00Short but with a nice message. I like it.
http:/...Short but with a nice message. I like it.<br /><br />http://troublebeingstrong.blogspot.com/2010/06/call-to-hunger.htmlDiane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-81469085515571762262010-06-18T10:06:55.068-07:002010-06-18T10:06:55.068-07:00"more dangerous than any bright star you are ..."more dangerous than any bright star you are resentful and hunger for praise."<br /><br />I really enjoyed this line. I could see the jealousy. The poem was short sweet and well done.Robert Lloydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09536151998025229196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-65184575745145213422010-06-18T09:30:47.013-07:002010-06-18T09:30:47.013-07:00very nice
and no traces of the wordle about it.
(...very nice<br />and no traces of the wordle about it.<br /><br />(hey, congrats on the PA ghazal)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-78813823092776924582010-06-18T04:49:19.227-07:002010-06-18T04:49:19.227-07:00This piece makes me want to research Antares! I d...This piece makes me want to research Antares! I did enjoy your piece.<br /><br />http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2010/06/looking-for-love.htmlMaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-90292250618483773242010-06-18T00:21:04.895-07:002010-06-18T00:21:04.895-07:00I like this. Economical use of the words but pack...I like this. Economical use of the words but packing a punch nonetheless.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-37232986801748829612010-06-18T00:11:22.516-07:002010-06-18T00:11:22.516-07:00Nicely done.
http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpres...Nicely done.<br /><br />http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-43605861719040172782010-06-17T22:47:00.193-07:002010-06-17T22:47:00.193-07:00Nice, compact piece.Nice, compact piece.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-19242783260124728962010-06-17T22:12:38.160-07:002010-06-17T22:12:38.160-07:00Delicious that you did so well, with so few words....Delicious that you did so well, with so few words. This is great, Tiel. Antares, eh?brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.com