tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post2083972620527534251..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: Singing EmptinessTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-72764554738928754862008-01-28T09:45:00.000-08:002008-01-28T09:45:00.000-08:00I love the connections you make:Cello strings - Po...I love the connections you make:<BR/>Cello strings - Power lines<BR/>The humming of the wind - humming of power through the lines; humming of cello strings...<BR/><BR/>I think that first stanza has something really strong in there. Maybe push it further? I don't know.. Its powerful though.<BR/><BR/>Nice work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-79999238960048095702008-01-23T18:24:00.000-08:002008-01-23T18:24:00.000-08:00Lovely word choices; I like it!Lovely word choices; I like it!SlyGlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07936928463506166974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-30227191341537504322008-01-22T17:24:00.001-08:002008-01-22T17:24:00.001-08:00This one left me feeling a bit sad, but it sure wa...This one left me feeling a bit sad, but it sure was beautiful. Thank you.Karinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05399849455270704359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-58155215589659261992008-01-22T17:24:00.000-08:002008-01-22T17:24:00.000-08:00This one left me feeling a bit sad, but it sure wa...This one left me feeling a bit sad, but it sure was beautiful. Thank you.Karinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05399849455270704359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-61887158499228324232008-01-22T16:41:00.000-08:002008-01-22T16:41:00.000-08:00each step...how very true! very very nice!!!each step...how very true! very very nice!!!aMushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14191649124291527517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-2346959006096529602008-01-22T16:08:00.000-08:002008-01-22T16:08:00.000-08:00Very powerful... excellent! ;)Very powerful... excellent! ;)Rob Kistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11365982588165098990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-6492169964331571492008-01-22T14:23:00.000-08:002008-01-22T14:23:00.000-08:00how true the importance of the emptiness to the so...how true the importance of the emptiness to the songCrafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-38633265437291076942008-01-22T14:16:00.000-08:002008-01-22T14:16:00.000-08:00Loved the concept of "humming wind" instantly! I c...Loved the concept of "humming wind" instantly! I can hear the wires singing in your words!<BR/><BR/>A beautiful write!<BR/><BR/>Smiles and LightAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-79707240786382472912008-01-22T11:45:00.000-08:002008-01-22T11:45:00.000-08:00While I was laughing at Redness's unique turn, I w...While I was laughing at Redness's unique turn, I was moved by this one, by the shear beauty. Rats, I forgot which 'sheer to use!Mary Timmehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06610970753020969331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-53739494576830688342008-01-22T10:33:00.000-08:002008-01-22T10:33:00.000-08:00this one was really well done. nice work.this one was really well done. nice work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-50895089722477169172008-01-22T09:55:00.000-08:002008-01-22T09:55:00.000-08:00Right on! I hadn't thought about the 'each step' c...Right on! I hadn't thought about the 'each step' concept - but for sure, it's true.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-14407936444105477762008-01-22T09:26:00.000-08:002008-01-22T09:26:00.000-08:00Really beautiful words.. the road does fork at eve...Really beautiful words.. the road does fork at every step<BR/><A HREF="http://incessantmusings.blogspot.com/2008/01/at-crossroad.html" REL="nofollow"> At the Crossroad </A>Preethihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10943344283863649487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-28690564724930387302008-01-22T07:13:00.000-08:002008-01-22T07:13:00.000-08:00I love your poem and your words say so much in suc...I love your poem and your words say so much in such a little space good job.Head Cookiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15878795387580544093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-68180455952785797202008-01-22T06:03:00.000-08:002008-01-22T06:03:00.000-08:00Exactly - the road forks at every step, every one ...Exactly - the road forks at every step, every one as important as the next! Beautifully said. Thank YOU!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-3481185354211139912008-01-22T04:43:00.000-08:002008-01-22T04:43:00.000-08:00its so tru, how at every step of our lives we face...its so tru, how at every step of our lives we face this challenge...<BR/>lovely wordsPratshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10849938760602815322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-51154147014873259512008-01-22T04:20:00.000-08:002008-01-22T04:20:00.000-08:00the road forks at every step - I had not thought i...the road forks at every step - I had not thought in that way, but how true! And how beautifully put.Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-8669422626266413752008-01-21T21:54:00.000-08:002008-01-21T21:54:00.000-08:00Beautiful poem.Beautiful poem.Forgetfulonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07895803172098820967noreply@blogger.com