tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post225338334197502596..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: Swallow FeatherTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-90128938781826566372009-04-27T21:45:00.000-07:002009-04-27T21:45:00.000-07:00nice sense of time passing, growth, and flightnice sense of time passing, growth, and flightAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-63335911849424081502009-04-25T19:46:00.000-07:002009-04-25T19:46:00.000-07:00Beautiful image...from here to there and now a swa...Beautiful image...from here to there and now a swallow in the wind.<br /><br />thank you<br /><br />bbhttp://torristravels.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-81753558826802918322009-04-25T14:19:00.000-07:002009-04-25T14:19:00.000-07:00Really beautifully crafted! Nice subtle rhymes an...Really beautifully crafted! Nice subtle rhymes and I like the scheme in the second stanza separating the swallow/follow rhymes.Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-86754961559174870752009-04-25T11:47:00.000-07:002009-04-25T11:47:00.000-07:00Lovely...Lovely...Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-30919892863191616812009-04-25T09:28:00.000-07:002009-04-25T09:28:00.000-07:00This makes me wish for wings!This makes me wish for wings!Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-4995278482630572632009-04-25T07:30:00.000-07:002009-04-25T07:30:00.000-07:00a ray of light. i like the way this poem flows.a ray of light. i like the way this poem flows.floretahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18220834824793299258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-61965330870605159202009-04-24T13:34:00.000-07:002009-04-24T13:34:00.000-07:00the movement in the second stanza is really amazin...the movement in the second stanza is really amazing, Tiel. There is definitely a shift there in that ninth line that carries the reader - very well done.S.Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04878331478972283702noreply@blogger.com