tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post2313204096602852196..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: Paper JamTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-54929685811853892372008-03-17T15:06:00.000-07:002008-03-17T15:06:00.000-07:00Wonderful poem in celebration of parades...:DWonderful poem in celebration of parades...:Dmaryt/theteachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17516961981692076719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-25270564942643771192008-03-17T10:58:00.000-07:002008-03-17T10:58:00.000-07:00I really like the way you used "paper jam"... this...I really like the way you used "paper jam"... this was fun.Marilynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06984777868047304830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-17349409231794097402008-03-17T02:19:00.000-07:002008-03-17T02:19:00.000-07:00Isn't it strange how so much of a celebration ends...Isn't it strange how so much of a celebration ends up down a sewer?anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-18919197642274576422008-03-16T17:52:00.000-07:002008-03-16T17:52:00.000-07:00Tis a fine way to use the word drink. Have a grea...Tis a fine way to use the word drink. Have a great MM. :)Sandeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06785788498697004273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-74260362286524324302008-01-19T06:14:00.000-08:002008-01-19T06:14:00.000-08:00I like the rhyme scheme you've developed. And I lo...I like the rhyme scheme you've developed. And I love the image of the rain washing away the rush of colors in the print. The pun at the end gives it just the right light-hearted touch. Good job! I am terribly into sonnets these days myself.Andromeda Jazmonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12355192738014962965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-17613491329168937532008-01-18T14:41:00.000-08:002008-01-18T14:41:00.000-08:00It could be a variation on a Petrarchan sonnet, or...It could be a variation on a Petrarchan sonnet, or it could be a "nonce form." I love that particular term, which is applied to a form invented for use in a particular poem.<BR/><BR/>Very nice sonnet, whatever designation you opt to give it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com