tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post2363442023164521471..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: Elbow MonthTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-20379522008010080082009-10-07T20:32:54.052-07:002009-10-07T20:32:54.052-07:00months as "elbows" and "hinges"...months as "elbows" and "hinges" -- great metaphors!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-55409670942714317222009-10-07T13:15:51.146-07:002009-10-07T13:15:51.146-07:00I love the first half. It really rings in my arth...I love the first half. It really rings in my arthritic october-loving joints.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-56865637053836180462009-10-06T20:22:04.941-07:002009-10-06T20:22:04.941-07:00A yes from here, too; "odd articulation"...A yes from here, too; "odd articulation" is a wonderful beginning, deftly followed.Debhttp://stoneymoss.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-66447381734983060292009-10-06T15:35:22.703-07:002009-10-06T15:35:22.703-07:00another great poem Tiel. so many beautiful images....another great poem Tiel. so many beautiful images. love those last lines. have a great night.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-24397396909731772042009-10-06T15:08:18.183-07:002009-10-06T15:08:18.183-07:00I so love this. Maybe because I so love October a...I so love this. Maybe because I so love October and have for years. So many wonderful things to see and smell in October...<br /><br />Your idea of it as a hinge is a good one.Markhttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-4891960603949088672009-10-06T14:08:56.681-07:002009-10-06T14:08:56.681-07:00I really like the sensation this evokes of hanging...I really like the sensation this evokes of hanging in aniticipation of what is coming. Beautiful work.Jane Penland Hooverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00990329236284586319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-65592308104138003012009-10-06T14:04:24.292-07:002009-10-06T14:04:24.292-07:00Yes, lush, is an apt description. And so abundant...Yes, lush, is an apt description. And so abundant with unexpected images (elbow of a month, a bend that hides the road ahead, iron evening - just for some) and the sense and new meanings they invoke. Very rich upon the ear.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-85326961161628310302009-10-06T12:28:26.511-07:002009-10-06T12:28:26.511-07:00How lush this poem is, love the imagery of October...How lush this poem is, love the imagery of October as an elbow, a hinge... your observation will definitely stick with me.Julie Jordan Scotthttp://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/noreply@blogger.com