tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post341461636736806748..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: I Will Be DistanceTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-83044761214776868592008-01-26T09:43:00.000-08:002008-01-26T09:43:00.000-08:00Just a perfect and hauntingly lovely haiku on deat...Just a perfect and hauntingly lovely haiku on death. And the O'Keefe painting is just right to go with it :) I think this is your best haiku, and that is saying a lot.<BR/><BR/>Ya Haqq!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-16936517910931138882008-01-25T08:43:00.000-08:002008-01-25T08:43:00.000-08:00I like the message and the image you chose to comp...I like the message and the image you chose to complement it.susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924982664582970754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-24391530356753332142008-01-23T13:51:00.000-08:002008-01-23T13:51:00.000-08:00I, too, love the way you used "distance" because i...I, too, love the way you used "distance" because it's unusual and makes me think! Very poetic!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-25557260592415351242008-01-23T12:20:00.000-08:002008-01-23T12:20:00.000-08:00the final line is wonderfully written - the whole ...the final line is wonderfully written - the whole haiku is great but I particularly like 'be distance' which is wildly provocative.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-65412726835564716922008-01-23T09:42:00.000-08:002008-01-23T09:42:00.000-08:00Not as depressing as it could have been. For some ...Not as depressing as it could have been. For some reason it actually seems almost peaceful.TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-47484936788669617182008-01-23T09:27:00.000-08:002008-01-23T09:27:00.000-08:00metaphysically prophetic... very nice....metaphysically prophetic... very nice....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.com