tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post3940232760899267520..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: SapphireTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-1346004126593401752008-01-20T21:54:00.000-08:002008-01-20T21:54:00.000-08:00Your poem seems perfect for the picture! The words...Your poem seems perfect for the picture! The words flow very smoothly. The below lines re my favorite, they are symbolic with the picture!<BR/><BR/><BR/>Light both brilliant and serene<BR/>falls on the shore and on me and you<BR/>under an arch of rock and dreamMedhinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17833745510877201001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-66083950040676524472008-01-19T22:30:00.000-08:002008-01-19T22:30:00.000-08:00I'm glad you're able to write a villanelle. I re...I'm glad you're able to write a villanelle. I really love some of the word choices you have in the poem like: "an arch of rock and dream". I mean, if you just take that phrase by itself, it could be interpreted as "living the dream-life of rock and roll". LOL. But it's lovely though; I see more than one ways to interpret.<BR/><BR/>Your use of alliteration in several places makes the entire poem very soothing.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for sharing, and welcome to Cafe Writing!Ambiguitylotushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01247817064783732958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-28691329870393146612008-01-13T03:12:00.001-08:002008-01-13T03:12:00.001-08:00your imagery is inspirational and lovelyyour imagery is inspirational and lovelyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03165001337030787302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-63846913652746767942008-01-13T03:12:00.000-08:002008-01-13T03:12:00.000-08:00your imagery is inspirational and lovelyyour imagery is inspirational and lovelyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03165001337030787302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-83504732564380166272008-01-12T18:04:00.000-08:002008-01-12T18:04:00.000-08:00that was perfection... i love this form,, and you ...that was perfection... i love this form,, and you really owned it on this one......paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-59902848356975204512008-01-09T12:17:00.000-08:002008-01-09T12:17:00.000-08:00your imagery is powerful as it is beautiful! i am ...your imagery is powerful as it is beautiful! i am enthralled by the mastery :) heres to endless inspiration in the art of words..Shafinaaz Hassimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14639184569752140877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-57800287383096840962008-01-09T08:47:00.000-08:002008-01-09T08:47:00.000-08:00"under an arch of rock and dream."i liked the repe..."under an arch of rock and dream."<BR/><BR/>i liked the repetition of this line. very beautiful.rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18248554235709475320noreply@blogger.com