tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post4882469453763743076..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: Windows of MemoryTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-64676014029057379082010-10-24T03:28:52.876-07:002010-10-24T03:28:52.876-07:00Tiel: very Intense and emotional too.. :)Tiel: very Intense and emotional too.. :)Oliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-67589482145206914762010-10-19T01:10:34.110-07:002010-10-19T01:10:34.110-07:00Ooo, I liked this one a lot. Especially the effec...Ooo, I liked this one a lot. Especially the effect of the gap to the last stanza.G. Grahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03689300506694508291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-91396179987390514272010-10-18T19:38:42.086-07:002010-10-18T19:38:42.086-07:00Beautifully written, like a 'dream-room' ...Beautifully written, like a 'dream-room' out of sync I would say...<br /><br />Interesting take.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-68105538213720445742010-10-17T09:41:13.263-07:002010-10-17T09:41:13.263-07:00lovely twists of words and meanings.
beautiful mag...lovely twists of words and meanings.<br />beautiful magpie.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-4582546881637637482010-10-16T18:44:19.083-07:002010-10-16T18:44:19.083-07:00This is a gorgeous poem. I loved the internal rhym...This is a gorgeous poem. I loved the internal rhyme (tilt out of kilter) and the phrase "sepia brilliance."Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-25711043747763065392010-10-16T13:15:17.681-07:002010-10-16T13:15:17.681-07:00The windows of memory
are full of sepia brilliance...The windows of memory<br />are full of sepia brilliance<br />and tilt out of kilter<br />like the walls in a dream-room.<br /><br />This expresses my experience to a T. Beautifully written.<br /><br />Victoria<br />http://liv2write2day.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-73178590811398703422010-10-16T11:21:18.019-07:002010-10-16T11:21:18.019-07:00How wonderful is this...
" you think, but you...How wonderful is this...<br />" you think, but your reaching hand<br />meets glass." i loved those closing lines...<br />"Brass loops like gypsy earrings" made me smile...such fine obervations...<br />Really liked it!Erratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-54759541889207329652010-10-16T06:10:52.725-07:002010-10-16T06:10:52.725-07:00nice. i like the textures...the gyrsy ear rings......nice. i like the textures...the gyrsy ear rings...i feel detatched through the glass that i feel in the end...nice magpie.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-65598704010219619232010-10-15T01:56:12.811-07:002010-10-15T01:56:12.811-07:00Beautifully written :o)Beautifully written :o)Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-52381198247122934012010-10-14T21:22:42.668-07:002010-10-14T21:22:42.668-07:00So true. Beautiful, as always.So true. Beautiful, as always.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-30613273749695309532010-10-14T18:40:25.091-07:002010-10-14T18:40:25.091-07:00You are such a beautiful writer. I always love rea...You are such a beautiful writer. I always love reading your poetry.Kristen Haskellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481526316071592146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-55534049733544013582010-10-14T16:00:11.820-07:002010-10-14T16:00:11.820-07:00life reflected
a window in a mirrorlife reflected<br />a window in a mirrorAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-81745863988473695122010-10-14T15:25:09.245-07:002010-10-14T15:25:09.245-07:00Wonderfully summing up the dissonant feeling of so...Wonderfully summing up the dissonant feeling of something out of kilter and not quite right. Beautiful poem...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-86336906648074038972010-10-14T14:31:51.993-07:002010-10-14T14:31:51.993-07:00"Something there out of frame"..such stu..."Something there out of frame"..such stuff as dreams are made on! Lovely...Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-82865981989034589712010-10-14T14:18:20.771-07:002010-10-14T14:18:20.771-07:00Windows of memory, encased in glass. Beautiful.Windows of memory, encased in glass. Beautiful.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-31999424108577178152010-10-14T09:03:20.267-07:002010-10-14T09:03:20.267-07:00lovely description..
unique ending.lovely description..<br />unique ending.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-82525114445921304022010-10-14T08:15:21.814-07:002010-10-14T08:15:21.814-07:00Love the slant of imperfect memory!Love the slant of imperfect memory!Harveehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03490108303790217277noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-84919949785323472922010-10-14T03:49:52.137-07:002010-10-14T03:49:52.137-07:00memory thwarted by glass in real-time... how true!...memory thwarted by glass in real-time... how true!Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-12035486752804682382010-10-14T02:01:44.188-07:002010-10-14T02:01:44.188-07:00A stunning poem, indeed!A stunning poem, indeed!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-56644533289506655002010-10-13T17:14:30.206-07:002010-10-13T17:14:30.206-07:00This truly IS a beautiful poem. I love the images...This truly IS a beautiful poem. I love the images. And the ending is exceptional!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com