tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post5304279118402577755..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: The Difference Between Oil and SaltTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-26569889083936424542008-12-27T17:09:00.000-08:002008-12-27T17:09:00.000-08:00I really enjoyed these poems, especially the way y...I really enjoyed these poems, especially the way you use the idea of sympathy. <BR/>Quite brilliant metaphors.<BR/>~AngieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-28551233480565469382008-04-22T10:02:00.000-07:002008-04-22T10:02:00.000-07:00Just amazing how you were able to incorporate the ...Just amazing how you were able to incorporate the rhyme into the sonnet! I like the first for it's simplicity and message and like the second for its craft!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-46195673722875021722008-04-21T19:59:00.000-07:002008-04-21T19:59:00.000-07:00Meaningful thoughts. Leave us with much to think a...Meaningful thoughts. Leave us with much to think about. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-43327377668635584072008-04-21T10:54:00.000-07:002008-04-21T10:54:00.000-07:00Wow- amazing! I was esp. drawn to the first as it ...Wow- amazing! I was esp. drawn to the first as it reminded me so much or something Rumi would write!:)<BR/>Just lovely and thought-provoking!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-21599362006030797132008-04-21T07:24:00.000-07:002008-04-21T07:24:00.000-07:00Thanks for sharing these on rwp. I love the idea o...Thanks for sharing these on rwp. I love the idea of the salt being restored to itself.<BR/><BR/>I like both of the poems, but I'm impressed with your versatility to be able to translate your ideas and images to the sonnet.<BR/><BR/>Great work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-86201665683842332532007-10-15T19:27:00.000-07:002007-10-15T19:27:00.000-07:00These are both wonderful.These are both wonderful.rbarenblathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10882606147795083729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-32410589353018421892007-10-14T07:37:00.000-07:002007-10-14T07:37:00.000-07:00I enjoyed both of these, specially the firstI enjoyed both of these, specially the firstCrafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-30821856763975431432007-10-12T13:36:00.000-07:002007-10-12T13:36:00.000-07:00well they were both lovely,, but i have to say i l...well they were both lovely,, but i have to say i loved the second one the best....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-75407332109006228022007-10-11T20:27:00.000-07:002007-10-11T20:27:00.000-07:00Loved the sonnet, especially the part where the sa...Loved the sonnet, especially the part where the salt 'spoke' most like a divinity.<BR/><BR/>There are lessons to be learned and 'connections' (i.e. the fact of being connected) waiting to be remembered. ^_^S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-42911772160306970082007-10-11T19:18:00.000-07:002007-10-11T19:18:00.000-07:00What lovely Sufi poems :) I loved them both.Eid Mu...What lovely Sufi poems :) I loved them both.<BR/><BR/>Eid Mubarak, dear Sister, to you and your family :) May the day be filled with love and joy!<BR/><BR/>Ya Haqq!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-70073619171763077962007-10-11T16:14:00.000-07:002007-10-11T16:14:00.000-07:00i like these both.i like these both.sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.com