tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post6930823897356237545..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: Yellow-Bark TreesTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-62326637227188466322010-06-16T14:04:57.221-07:002010-06-16T14:04:57.221-07:00"In a forest of yellow-bark trees
you can he..."In a forest of yellow-bark trees<br /> you can hear the whispering of unborn books"<br /><br />Loved that line and really enjoyed your Magpie.Robert Lloydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09536151998025229196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-22150394402449780062010-06-15T13:39:33.422-07:002010-06-15T13:39:33.422-07:00Loved this -- my favorite I've read so far. G...Loved this -- my favorite I've read so far. Great imagery all the way through, but I think I liked the 2nd stanza best -- a poem in itself.susan m hinckleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10073318305866251569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-48033844885644528222010-06-15T10:52:55.735-07:002010-06-15T10:52:55.735-07:00Lovely and witty at the same time. Well done.Lovely and witty at the same time. Well done.RAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17922537526607315266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-17935898278195162072010-06-15T09:14:27.521-07:002010-06-15T09:14:27.521-07:00So many wonderful images in this. LOVE the city o...So many wonderful images in this. LOVE the city of yellow telephone poles.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-66088937212769578492010-06-15T04:02:55.230-07:002010-06-15T04:02:55.230-07:00beautiful imagery and metaphors, i will never look...beautiful imagery and metaphors, i will never look at a pencil the same way again!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-19118090899588294952010-06-15T01:57:58.442-07:002010-06-15T01:57:58.442-07:00Any stanza could stand alone but together, magnifi...Any stanza could stand alone but together, magnificent!Stafford Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03048757515249725540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-44250837627187259832010-06-14T21:48:41.495-07:002010-06-14T21:48:41.495-07:00what a beautiful image.."unborn books" ...what a beautiful image.."unborn books" Awesome Magpie!showmehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11858999587498974794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-92050941577079660052010-06-14T15:54:02.736-07:002010-06-14T15:54:02.736-07:00fascinating poem...some wonderful imagery...whispe...fascinating poem...some wonderful imagery...whispering unborn books...i love the scratch of the pencil on paper too so glad you grabbed that...nice magpie!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-70665960686965274142010-06-14T13:33:39.472-07:002010-06-14T13:33:39.472-07:00This is exceptional..wonderful imagination!This is exceptional..wonderful imagination!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-32898576600229927532010-06-14T12:14:47.192-07:002010-06-14T12:14:47.192-07:00Wonderfully done! Graphite wires hum with the comm...Wonderfully done! Graphite wires hum with the communication of secrets! When the morning doves perch on my telephone wires and sing, I will wonder if they are sharing stories they hear humming through the wires.Maureen Newmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18095773443792096243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-64326033581075490972010-06-14T07:41:10.812-07:002010-06-14T07:41:10.812-07:00I absolutely love the imagery of this. Beautiful!...I absolutely love the imagery of this. Beautiful!<br /><br />www.angiemuresan.comAngie Muresanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13830360358541367259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-65939165873211923302010-06-13T18:38:45.324-07:002010-06-13T18:38:45.324-07:00Yellow-licious!!Yellow-licious!!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-17182078749248445362010-06-12T19:24:47.443-07:002010-06-12T19:24:47.443-07:00Exquisite imagery. Your words bring life to the pa...Exquisite imagery. Your words bring life to the page, as always.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-33838083184359780132010-06-12T08:04:21.642-07:002010-06-12T08:04:21.642-07:00Beautiful Magpie! As I am a teacher, the last sta...Beautiful Magpie! As I am a teacher, the last stanza is my favorite. Oh, to inspire that rustle!brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-66557781986861338782010-06-12T06:13:08.275-07:002010-06-12T06:13:08.275-07:00Yellow shafts of light coming in varied ways in th...Yellow shafts of light coming in varied ways in this world. Well done.Paul Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01836602667355512504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-14476300628569075862010-06-11T18:01:41.568-07:002010-06-11T18:01:41.568-07:00I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you.I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you.Sue Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15864986500627496240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-53934744074195224282010-06-11T16:21:58.550-07:002010-06-11T16:21:58.550-07:00Who knew the humble pencil could, in itself, be so...Who knew the humble pencil could, in itself, be so inspiring? Loved your poem.Yemallahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08681206942154859520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-46615428806487082942010-06-11T09:21:27.172-07:002010-06-11T09:21:27.172-07:00You brought these pencils to life! Nice Magpie!You brought these pencils to life! Nice Magpie!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-51624350572377090232010-06-11T09:17:51.352-07:002010-06-11T09:17:51.352-07:00a forest of yellow-bark trees...such imagery-wonde...a forest of yellow-bark trees...such imagery-wonderful MagpieKathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-14066884138006462592010-06-11T08:47:06.330-07:002010-06-11T08:47:06.330-07:00If only we all could hear the whispering of unborn...If only we all could hear <i>the whispering of unborn books</i>...The imagery was <b>amazing!</b> Brilliant Magpie.Aoife.Troxelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08557613486797904602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-33645965336381276772010-06-11T08:43:08.136-07:002010-06-11T08:43:08.136-07:00Love "the whispering of unborn books" , ...Love "the whispering of unborn books" , wonderful magpie....bkmAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com