tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post7992547912716345541..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: False AlarmTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-8454071542556412182008-06-17T14:00:00.000-07:002008-06-17T14:00:00.000-07:00This is really terrific.This is really terrific.rbarenblathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10882606147795083729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-40041536771276423362008-06-17T08:23:00.000-07:002008-06-17T08:23:00.000-07:00so many details and stories within a few lines.. f...so many details and stories within a few lines.. flowed like water... and the story was over...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-13116181374885748422008-06-16T20:48:00.000-07:002008-06-16T20:48:00.000-07:00surprising rhymes and thought provoking toosurprising rhymes and thought provoking tooAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-31746881977491831832008-06-16T18:23:00.000-07:002008-06-16T18:23:00.000-07:00Reflects our sucky economy, too! Great last line.Reflects our sucky economy, too! Great last line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-31519331088209219232008-06-16T16:51:00.000-07:002008-06-16T16:51:00.000-07:00Manages to fit a lot of feeling into a simple seri...Manages to fit a lot of feeling into a simple series of events.Lironehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01186563179366227913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-28782044513597316492008-06-16T07:53:00.000-07:002008-06-16T07:53:00.000-07:00Lovely, heartfelt, poignant.Lovely, heartfelt, poignant.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-73786293628188211132008-06-16T04:54:00.000-07:002008-06-16T04:54:00.000-07:00This is a very concise poem. The housekeeper speak...This is a very concise poem. The housekeeper speaks at just the right moment, and reveals a secret we don't expect. Love the internal/slant rhymes you use here. Nicely done. "rough-edged shadows of the parking lot" is a particularly nice phrase.mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-22063690739580613922008-06-16T01:52:00.000-07:002008-06-16T01:52:00.000-07:00You offer vivid details and insight into the hotel...You offer vivid details and insight into the hotel worker's character. A pleasure to read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-13977323632252291122008-06-16T01:40:00.000-07:002008-06-16T01:40:00.000-07:00I really enjoyed this poem. Your housekeeper is s...I really enjoyed this poem. Your housekeeper is so believable. You've really brought her to life in this work. I like the little details (the smell of smoke).Piphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11205242741145067573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-63105026030235303572008-06-14T07:41:00.000-07:002008-06-14T07:41:00.000-07:00Again, you've pulled off a brilliant piece of poet...Again, you've pulled off a brilliant piece of poetry. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work. Have a nice weekend.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.com