tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post8175737309195149352..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: GoodwillTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-71482322508750545112008-02-07T10:11:00.000-08:002008-02-07T10:11:00.000-08:00Great poem! This is the first time I've encounter...Great poem! This is the first time I've encountered this form; I want to try it now.Allysonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02498689672857820197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-3991856174596430952008-02-06T04:55:00.000-08:002008-02-06T04:55:00.000-08:00Love the Tennessee Williams nod. I too am a thrift...Love the Tennessee Williams nod. I too am a thrifter, and honestly prefer it to the actual store!Cary Ranthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02531098658581671973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-77146735122769345672008-02-05T17:55:00.000-08:002008-02-05T17:55:00.000-08:00I like the way this goes - amphibrachic trimeter, ...I like the way this goes - amphibrachic trimeter, not heard of that before but if you break it down into syllables it means something completely different!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-62488401725906462692008-02-05T17:14:00.000-08:002008-02-05T17:14:00.000-08:00This was well crafted -- I enjoyed it. Great subj...This was well crafted -- I enjoyed it. Great subject matter.<BR/><BR/>My wife is a size 1 or 3, depending on how the garment is cut. She goes to second hand stores all the time and finds these fabulous salesman's samples of designer label clothing -- that have never been worn, save maybe by a mannequin. I am a pudgy old man and can't find a thing in those places. I am extremely jealous of those of you who can... ;)Rob Kistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11365982588165098990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-50558550525892446222008-02-04T21:30:00.000-08:002008-02-04T21:30:00.000-08:00Beautiful. Content and form. (Though it's hard to ...Beautiful. Content and form. (Though it's hard to believe you don't have patience :-) )Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-79582007501306170602008-02-04T17:20:00.000-08:002008-02-04T17:20:00.000-08:00I've only read one villanelle so far, Dale's I bel...I've only read one villanelle so far, Dale's I believe. <BR/><BR/>The form you chose, though shorter, is probably more difficult, at least for me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-39421232370786770402008-02-04T14:55:00.000-08:002008-02-04T14:55:00.000-08:00Don't feel bad; I posted a villanelle last week in...Don't feel bad; I posted a villanelle last week instead!<BR/><BR/>I hear the echoes of a villanelle in here. Love the Goodwill angle!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-86391151426207023322008-02-04T07:26:00.000-08:002008-02-04T07:26:00.000-08:00Very nicely done...oh I didnt realize that it had ...Very nicely done...oh I didnt realize that it had to be a vilanelle...until I came here! oopsy.ULhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15005895432233940416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-11253264909634424542008-02-04T00:25:00.000-08:002008-02-04T00:25:00.000-08:00I love second hand clothes too, I like the various...I love second hand clothes too, I like the various ways you use the word Goodwill in this poem. Excellent and the suggestion of vilanelle was entirely optional so no need to feel bad about not doing one (though you do them very well!)Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-20981373784258195242008-02-04T00:14:00.000-08:002008-02-04T00:14:00.000-08:00Agree with Dale, you're good at "this stuff." This...Agree with Dale, you're good at "this stuff." This is very nice, reads easy.Rethabilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03523368313680103826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-70670766842485568412008-02-03T23:23:00.000-08:002008-02-03T23:23:00.000-08:00I'm a thrifter, too. Loved this, and very nice tri...I'm a thrifter, too. Loved this, and very nice triolet!chicklegirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03000215636803243874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-31980390729635875782008-01-31T10:20:00.000-08:002008-01-31T10:20:00.000-08:00Hey, no fair skimping! If I can take it you can. ...Hey, no fair skimping! If I can take it you can. You're actually good at this stuff. :->Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14523194846272870013noreply@blogger.com