tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post832370416406534283..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: Pleistocene RemnantTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-35060601233203785852008-10-07T19:36:00.000-07:002008-10-07T19:36:00.000-07:00I have to agree with everyone. Such a short, yet ...I have to agree with everyone. Such a short, yet powerful piece. You have such great word choices, especially the second stanza (my favorite). :)<BR/><BR/>Thanks for sharing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-77866975370790976622008-10-06T22:54:00.000-07:002008-10-06T22:54:00.000-07:00I think this is my favorite of all the pieces you'...I think this is my favorite of all the pieces you've shared with CW. It's just so powerful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-39949971931247568252008-10-02T07:08:00.000-07:002008-10-02T07:08:00.000-07:00This is so incredibly powerful and beautiful...I l...This is so incredibly powerful and beautiful...I love it! Wow. So visual I can taste it, hear it, and feel it in every crevice. Thank you for sharing!Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-36514482558055759152008-10-02T05:05:00.000-07:002008-10-02T05:05:00.000-07:00I have often attempted to color my mind in silence...I have often attempted to color my mind in silence so your first line really grabbed me. The loneliness and sense of abandonment is so strong in this poem. Seedless thistle, skulls, crevice, empty-- what wonderful words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-58448153185147991572008-09-30T17:37:00.000-07:002008-09-30T17:37:00.000-07:00I meant night. See Ya~I meant night. See Ya~poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-71234172438043094972008-09-30T17:36:00.000-07:002008-09-30T17:36:00.000-07:00Tiel, you are incredibly talented. This is so bea...Tiel, you are incredibly talented. This is so beautiful. I feel as though you give yourself easily to writing and I've been lucky enough to stumble across its beauty. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.com