tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post8474431523990018660..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: Eden LostTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-83847790842564955312008-03-13T12:14:00.000-07:002008-03-13T12:14:00.000-07:00i believe everything we do and say and dream chang...i believe everything we do and say and dream changes destiny... we are a culmination of all of those things not a predestination of none of them....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-8844332398888521892008-03-13T07:33:00.000-07:002008-03-13T07:33:00.000-07:00Well my dear besides writing an interesting take o...Well my dear besides writing an interesting take on Day 5/6 (can't remember which day God created Adam an then Eve), you did a great job!. So this is how you all do it. I don't know how to keep up reading fellow writers work and write my own. Therefore, no one reads mine. But then maybe they just are not interesting.<BR/>Thanks for the treat. Well done.<BR/><BR/>-bdCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-21228284974957520152008-03-11T13:22:00.000-07:002008-03-11T13:22:00.000-07:00oh- the first line is gorgeousoh- the first line is gorgeousren powell https://www.blogger.com/profile/15593358547415514500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-68706448610792069732008-03-10T20:56:00.000-07:002008-03-10T20:56:00.000-07:00But wouldn't destiny already have determined the d...But wouldn't destiny already have determined the dream?<BR/><BR/>Great way to combine a lot of prompts. I don't think I could have done it.Marilynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06984777868047304830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-26925630444594978402008-03-10T20:18:00.000-07:002008-03-10T20:18:00.000-07:00Okay, let me try again since Blogger just didn't g...Okay, let me try again since Blogger just didn't get my comment. :(<BR/><BR/>I was just saying that I really like the last line with "Experiment..." because I daydream and dream all the time. I find so many uses with dreams that I sometimes wonder if it would change destiny. Actually, in some ways, my dreams already have, and I thank you for sharing something that fits nicely in a poem.Ambiguitylotushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01247817064783732958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-22045377322329341862008-03-10T15:32:00.000-07:002008-03-10T15:32:00.000-07:00I always enjoy how you do these each week. Yes dr...I always enjoy how you do these each week. Yes dreams can change destiny. Have a great MM. :)Sandeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06785788498697004273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-24913535371827803232008-03-10T06:14:00.000-07:002008-03-10T06:14:00.000-07:00Beautifully done as always, and yes dreams either ...Beautifully done as always, and yes dreams either realized or thwarted can change destiny.Durward Discussionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15023629504094283860noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-69943564378787759492008-03-09T22:46:00.000-07:002008-03-09T22:46:00.000-07:00Clever how you mixed them all.Happy MM!IanClever how you mixed them all.<BR/><BR/>Happy MM!<BR/><BR/>IanIanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14497045412007902460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-28324909162947132412008-03-09T13:53:00.000-07:002008-03-09T13:53:00.000-07:00awesome experiment...awesome experiment...little wing writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-9296689479320626512008-03-09T06:37:00.000-07:002008-03-09T06:37:00.000-07:00excellent thought provoking piece. I too liked the...excellent thought provoking piece. I too liked the 'snuggling with a snake'Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-29497832685947006022008-03-08T02:02:00.000-08:002008-03-08T02:02:00.000-08:00My favourite bit was the wry commnet about snuggli...My favourite bit was the wry commnet about snuggling with a snake.<BR/><BR/>A gem!<BR/><BR/>Smiles and LightGemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-1584881209004044812008-03-07T17:24:00.000-08:002008-03-07T17:24:00.000-08:00Impressive. The use of multi-prompts and still sta...Impressive. The use of multi-prompts and still staying on topic - a great question and probably doesn't have an answer in stone. Great!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-9347225309671175402008-03-07T14:37:00.000-08:002008-03-07T14:37:00.000-08:00Thought-provoking piece. I little poem that say a ...Thought-provoking piece. I little poem that say a lot and leave the readers think in the end. Ultimately the readers complete the poem.<BR/><BR/>I wish you well.<BR/><BR/>~ JequesJequeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02379256666172458498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-35306271177561956872008-03-07T14:04:00.000-08:002008-03-07T14:04:00.000-08:00Can Eden truly be lost if our dreams create a new ...Can Eden truly be lost if our dreams create a new destiny? I think through this new destiny we create another Eden and another dream. Your short poem leaves us to ponder many aspects. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice weekend. And, congrats on the book of poems.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-31518673950565676402008-03-07T12:43:00.000-08:002008-03-07T12:43:00.000-08:00I feel like I got so much from this short poem. It...I feel like I got so much from this short poem. It's a good question you ask at the end. I think they can, and have! But your poem presents an enigma as well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com