tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post8604778243686429514..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: HourglassTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-58833009830322368362010-09-21T11:30:45.780-07:002010-09-21T11:30:45.780-07:00Clearly profound.Clearly profound.~T~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17969562036638831748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-32657322355709077832010-09-20T23:52:54.394-07:002010-09-20T23:52:54.394-07:00Ah, my favorite so far for this prompt. It is so p...Ah, my favorite so far for this prompt. It is so profound.Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-72386096989553702522010-09-17T19:43:04.818-07:002010-09-17T19:43:04.818-07:00oh nic. strong close...the hiss of the sand...i mi...oh nic. strong close...the hiss of the sand...i might hear that whisper for a while...nice magpie!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-9380752435181252282010-09-17T18:15:56.851-07:002010-09-17T18:15:56.851-07:00The opening lines draw you into the poem, flows ve...The opening lines draw you into the poem, flows very wellAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-61785539410668401122010-09-17T16:23:58.191-07:002010-09-17T16:23:58.191-07:00I like this ... makes u think.I like this ... makes u think.kathi harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10966848441799595900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-20764121562352292562010-09-17T16:23:52.392-07:002010-09-17T16:23:52.392-07:00I like this ... makes u think.I like this ... makes u think.kathi harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10966848441799595900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-20775310842220347292010-09-17T14:36:58.323-07:002010-09-17T14:36:58.323-07:00"this too shall pass"
love this take on..."this too shall pass"<br /><br />love this take on the magpie<br /><br />ReneAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-44949793685263144842010-09-17T10:42:21.617-07:002010-09-17T10:42:21.617-07:00Wonderfully insightful poem. Do you see yourself i...Wonderfully insightful poem. Do you see yourself in me? I love that question it is very timely.Kristen Haskellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481526316071592146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-40617430673387778032010-09-17T09:36:29.761-07:002010-09-17T09:36:29.761-07:00Glass is made from sand
like flesh from dust.
Oh...Glass is made from sand<br />like flesh from dust. <br /><br />Oh what insight you have...ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-64805286535354317432010-09-17T06:11:23.416-07:002010-09-17T06:11:23.416-07:00Killer opening line!Killer opening line!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-83855788365005362372010-09-17T05:38:38.179-07:002010-09-17T05:38:38.179-07:00Mine is just to whisper with the hiss of this fall...Mine is just to whisper with the hiss of this falling sand<br />very beautifully done!Priyanka Bhowmickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11658819351312019129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-4187936521496316982010-09-17T05:35:01.095-07:002010-09-17T05:35:01.095-07:00Very well done, and thought provoking..really like...Very well done, and thought provoking..really like it!!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-1969622565937598462010-09-16T16:40:42.054-07:002010-09-16T16:40:42.054-07:00Great post-enjoyed it!Great post-enjoyed it!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-27021139250705485222010-09-16T14:49:41.810-07:002010-09-16T14:49:41.810-07:00"The grains drip through my waist." Rea..."The grains drip through my waist." Really liked that line. Amazing imagery with the added "clever monkeys" we are.Just Mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06182345687430630873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-7101677165186325712010-09-16T14:43:05.336-07:002010-09-16T14:43:05.336-07:00clever monkeys all, aren't we? your rhythm is ...clever monkeys all, aren't we? your rhythm is impeccablePaulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.com