tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post9020882875066073108..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: Chaff and BrineTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-4606240246407946422007-09-17T18:40:00.000-07:002007-09-17T18:40:00.000-07:00Awesome poem. Welcome aboard the train!Awesome poem. Welcome aboard the train!Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17968479919482739686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-36445942372305562672007-09-17T17:59:00.000-07:002007-09-17T17:59:00.000-07:00this makes me thirsty.i can almost feel the brush ...this makes me thirsty.<BR/><BR/>i can almost feel the brush of the vultures wings on my sand blasted cheeks.<BR/><BR/>welcome aboard the poetry trainJoy Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04976987581528470589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-86104794852016821332007-09-17T17:42:00.000-07:002007-09-17T17:42:00.000-07:00so stark and desolate.. i feel parched having read...so stark and desolate.. i feel parched having read it... very well done...paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-18978900267842766142007-09-17T11:38:00.000-07:002007-09-17T11:38:00.000-07:00Brilliant! So glad you jumped aboard the Poetry Tr...Brilliant! So glad you jumped aboard the Poetry Train so I could read this. I really love these lines:<BR/>'hearing the voice of the scorpion<BR/>and the scraping of the vulture’s shadow over rough rock'<BR/><BR/>Really, really marvellous.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-63540852903992642612007-09-17T08:20:00.000-07:002007-09-17T08:20:00.000-07:00You couldn't have done the Weekend Wordsmith thing...You couldn't have done the Weekend Wordsmith thing over the weekend because I forgot to post the word until late last night. I apologize. Thanks for sharing your poem.Bonnie Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07813549471704485150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-40956419860694799072007-09-17T08:18:00.000-07:002007-09-17T08:18:00.000-07:00Wow, that's pretty.I came over from Weekend Wordsm...Wow, that's pretty.<BR/><BR/>I came over from Weekend Wordsmith; have you heard of Rhian's Poetry Train? There's a link at my place. She'd dig this poem. Come jump on!Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.com