tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post113328261375998944..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: Object Of DesireTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-50651594182231198032008-01-29T09:53:00.000-08:002008-01-29T09:53:00.000-08:00oh my, that is a keeper... a treasure of a find......oh my, that is a keeper... a treasure of a find... love is that easy sometimes...little wing writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-87859478659906489542008-01-28T15:19:00.000-08:002008-01-28T15:19:00.000-08:00Good poem, and great last line.Good poem, and great last line.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-50815310146783995222008-01-28T06:45:00.000-08:002008-01-28T06:45:00.000-08:00excellentexcellentCrafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-35525163435834946282008-01-27T15:28:00.000-08:002008-01-27T15:28:00.000-08:00Well this is as good as it gets! A delightful poem...Well this is as good as it gets! A delightful poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-44628908305739588892007-09-20T09:35:00.000-07:002007-09-20T09:35:00.000-07:00Outstanding.I've known that feeling too - somethin...Outstanding.<BR/>I've known that feeling too - something that meant nothing meant to anyone else meant so much to me.<BR/>Thanks for sharingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-4984948859963768422007-09-19T09:13:00.000-07:002007-09-19T09:13:00.000-07:00I love the rhythm, the pace you set here. You nev...I love the rhythm, the pace you set here. You never missed a "beat".Annie Jeffrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-60417420370490365732007-09-18T20:39:00.000-07:002007-09-18T20:39:00.000-07:00I feel the same way about that last line - pretty ...I feel the same way about that last line - pretty amazing. It's a thoughtful poem - I really enjoyed reading it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-39792115320387452352007-09-18T16:55:00.000-07:002007-09-18T16:55:00.000-07:00such perfect pacing - each word doing its work.such perfect pacing - each word doing its work.Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-26225717278021042812007-09-18T13:11:00.000-07:002007-09-18T13:11:00.000-07:00I like the way you illustrate generosity here.I like the way you illustrate generosity here.Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-26719279899748427082007-09-18T09:47:00.000-07:002007-09-18T09:47:00.000-07:00Incredible! Your words tell a story that tugs at t...Incredible! Your words tell a story that tugs at the heart, opens the eye. Lovely.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-43381372167606850422007-09-18T09:13:00.000-07:002007-09-18T09:13:00.000-07:00The last line is brilliant!The last line is brilliant!paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-64413072429345008422007-09-18T07:32:00.000-07:002007-09-18T07:32:00.000-07:00"left me graceless and uneasy" and so at odds with..."left me graceless and uneasy" <BR/><BR/>and so at odds with the grace of this poem. It is touching and beautiful.sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-67514300920133202692007-09-18T04:59:00.000-07:002007-09-18T04:59:00.000-07:00One man's trash is another man's treasure.It's all...One man's trash is another man's treasure.<BR/>It's all material!<BR/>xo<BR/>BlueGillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08845512494417503198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-11743747571967396272007-09-18T04:54:00.000-07:002007-09-18T04:54:00.000-07:00This is a truly amazing piece. I loved every singl...This is a truly amazing piece. I loved every single word, they were all so right.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-79433817019850848082007-09-17T21:44:00.000-07:002007-09-17T21:44:00.000-07:00love it reminded me of a gift i was given last wee...love it <BR/>reminded me of a gift i was given last week - an odd 'bead' from a friend - which now holds a special place in my heart -more than any store brought gift could giveAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-85534419466364236102007-09-17T21:28:00.000-07:002007-09-17T21:28:00.000-07:00"Your heart was on my fingertips that dayto crush-..."Your heart was on my fingertips that day<BR/>to crush-- or give away"<BR/><BR/>Just wonderful imagery, and very touching.Rob Kistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11365982588165098990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-63257798668591951322007-09-17T21:20:00.000-07:002007-09-17T21:20:00.000-07:00The last line is gorgeous. I really enjoy reading ...The last line is gorgeous. I really enjoy reading your work whenever I get to stop by here.RomanceWriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14920489469191764147noreply@blogger.com