tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post1869973918186047251..comments2024-02-23T02:11:35.147-08:00Comments on Knocking From Inside: Dawn's Cafe – SeligmanTiel Aisha Ansarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-63631704186636052982009-05-29T23:15:59.169-07:002009-05-29T23:15:59.169-07:00This was much more than a snapshot - as well as be...This was much more than a snapshot - as well as being caught in the present travel-stop, I could feel your past and even the hint of things to come. Thankyou for sharing your words through this blog.Maxinehttp://slamup.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-35786272256002926232009-05-26T05:58:22.793-07:002009-05-26T05:58:22.793-07:00A trip down memory lane can serve up nice fodder f...A trip down memory lane can serve up nice fodder for a poem, can't it? Your poem is no exception. Wonderful voice. Loved the line:<br />maybe the only two<br />black men in all of Arizona in 1981.<br />Have a nice day.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-11302725564008987962009-05-25T21:21:30.386-07:002009-05-25T21:21:30.386-07:00irenet calls it a "snapshot" and I like that. a po...irenet calls it a "snapshot" and I like that. a poetic slice. great authentic voice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-45889326826401400452009-05-25T21:20:51.526-07:002009-05-25T21:20:51.526-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Danika Dinsmorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06472222686878922186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12056722.post-72195063697142023372009-05-25T17:57:16.629-07:002009-05-25T17:57:16.629-07:00Like this snapshot.."maybe the only two black men ...Like this snapshot.."maybe the only two black men in all of Arizona in 1981" and your retake of Route 66 at the last sentence.irenethttp://eneri-hot.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com