Tuesday, October 02, 2007

Drip

drip
drip
water
from faucet
wasted while elsewhere
drought grips the earth with shriveled hands

2 comments:

Brian said...

this last line really bring everything together... gripping with shriveled hands - very nice

Storm Dweller said...

Great take on the challenge. It reminds me of the Fibonacci utilized in Tool's "Lateralus." In that case they used the sequence for individual syllables over words.