Friday, June 06, 2008

Night Is

black velvet ribbon
wrapped around day-blossom stems
held by silver clasp

Collection available! Knocking from Inside

9 comments:

Pam said...

Beautiful haiku-- night as a ribbon wrapped around day!

I like the new look to your blog. Increased readibility.

Linda Jacobs said...

Yes, I agree about your new look. It always annoyed me to try to read your beautiful words through the bridge.

The is such a delicious haiku. It's like an exquisite piece of chocolate!

GreenishLady said...

Three little lines. Three readings. Silver clasp... Ah... the moon?

Beautiful haiku.

Granny Smith said...

Utterly beautiful haiku. As usual!

ell said...

That was simply beautiful!

keith hillman said...

Lovely.Another word would have spoiled it.

Greyscale Territory said...

This sounds like a small but powerful miracle! Lovely!

Jamie said...

Lovely words
conveying the strength of images
to a waiting mind

Marilyn said...

That was some memorable language. Nicely done.