Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Closing Hour

3 Word Wednesday: Darkness. Patronize. Weaken.

patrons leave the bar
darkness weakening to dawn
like ink in water

Collection available! Knocking from Inside

10 comments:

Missy said...

Nicely done! Love how you brought the words together.

Linda Jacobs said...

Wow, wonderful simile!

April Lindfors said...

This is so beautiful, nice images come to mind.

Bobbie said...

Sweet!! I like this :)

Mark said...

Slick as a whistle. I like it!

Tumblewords: said...

looks like a watercolor - nice!

Just someone said...

Its great how three lines tie everything up so well! Great piece

pjd said...

Love the ink in water image.

MichaelO said...

Been a while since I've pulled an all nighter like that! LOVED the ink in water metaphor!

Michelle Johnson said...

truly a vision from the drunken soul who stumbles out into the dawn. well done Tiel.