Friday, September 11, 2009

Torch Singer

They think it's hip to be scofflaws,
nonconformists, not members of some
faceless multitude. They're all half-asleep,
nodding over flasks of plum wine
and sugary confections in an illegal
all-night dive

where in the harsh limelight she sings
husky-voiced, for a pittance. Her life's
no bed of clover, but she's content.
She's extending her talents, and they
find their own crushing mediocrities

words courtesy of Read Write Poem
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rallentanda said...

Clever use of the words.Good poem

Raven's Wing Poetry said...

I like how you used the words to weave your narrative. Good write.


Anonymous said...

I like the idea that you can be crushed by mediocrity.

Wayne Pitchko said...

very nice....takes me to a place....Vancouver 1957...after hours/bottle club...always had a torch singer there.....actually there was a club in vancouver back then called the Torch...geez ill read it once again and I WILL be back there...

Anonymous said...

from Therese B. at RWP -- Perhaps a poem in tribute to a real torch singer (Fitzgerald, Holiday, etc.); or perhaps a kind of parable warning us not to judge lest we be judged: those whom we mistreat as self-serving commodities may be more virtuous than we are.

Amulya Rajan said...

Very intelligent use of words... like the message too.