Wednesday, July 28, 2010


3 Word Wednesday: Abuse. Cramp. Hatred.

abused souls arise
unstained by years of hatred
cramped wings opening

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Naquillity said...

very strong haiku. shows life can be positive after abuse. hope all is well.

Thomma Lyn said...

Oh, I love this one -- it shines with hope, arising from ashes like the phoenix.

Anonymous said...

This is just lovely.

Greyscale Territory said...

Inner strength can never be broken! It is, at least, there - waiting to be re-born!

Sepiru Chris said...

Hello Tiel,

This is a charming haiku.

I love the idea.

I am not sure I buy the idea, but I love the idea and the haiku is nice and tight.


Leo said...

oh yes, those wings do open.. tight haiku, like chris puts it :)

do join us at Haiku Heights when you can :) we're a new Meme, just started and in first week..!

"K" said...

Lovely and inspirational.