Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Just Because It's Right

3 Word Wednesday: Abstain. Halo. Prayer. A good set of words for Ramadan.

make daily prayers
abstain from food and drink
expect no halo

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14 comments:

KaLynn ("MiMi") said...

I like.

R.S. Bohn said...

I like it as well, especially the last line. And the way it's so short and succint -- that last line almost reads as an order. Very pragmatic, in a way.

Mia Mirza said...

profound piece this is...
http://fantasyfront.blogspot.com/2010/08/angel.html

Deborah said...

SO to the point ... I love it!

Jay Thurston said...

Neat poem! Like R.S. said, the last line, "expect no halo" is certainly the memorable highlight.

Susannah said...

I like it very much. :-)

"K" said...

Yes.
Ramadhan Mubarak!

Coraline J. Thompson said...

"Expect no halo" Great work! Very powerfully packed.

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Carina said...

Wonderful to get all three words into a haiku. Well done!

Angel said...

Nice job on this one.

Bobbie Sandlin said...

Simple and true :)

Ramesh Sood said...

Good one..lovely..

Ramesh Sood said...

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The Dryad said...

I love this poem. So simple yet says so much. And captures the Ramadan theme well.