Flivvers sputter black-smoke
fricative syllables
from uncleaned exhaust pipes.
Fledgling executive,
frowsily munching her
farl breakfast cake, mutters:
"Far too early for this."
Tiel, your first attempt at a Pleiades is a very good one. I enjoyed reading this. It makes me think of an executive who's in a rush to get to the office for an early meeting. Nice job. Have a nice day.
Tiel, your first attempt at a Pleiades is a very good one. I enjoyed reading this. It makes me think of an executive who's in a rush to get to the office for an early meeting. Nice job. Have a nice day.
ReplyDeleteYour posts are always very imaginative.
ReplyDeleteAh, I hear it!
ReplyDeleteAdore this "grumble grumble" beginning to a new working day! Lovely tensions!
ReplyDeleteLove it! It makes perfect reading..
ReplyDeleteWhat did ya call it?
Well that's my mornings :)
ReplyDeleteI love it.