Wednesday, September 26, 2007

Seaweed Perfume

3 Word Wednesday: Caught. Eager. Perfume.

salt seaweed perfume
eager fishermen pull nets
caught fish flash in sun

12 comments:

charlotta-love said...

I can smell the ocean!

RomanceWriter said...
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RomanceWriter said...

Very vivid. The last line jumps off the screen like a fish.

tumblewords said...

As always, your words are magic!

Shephard said...

Oh very clever! I love good haiku. :)
~S

Jo said...

I also love good haiku and this is wonderful!

This Girl Remembers said...

Oh, how evocative! I can taste the salt breeze, smell the fish - just lovely. :)

paisley said...

i am always awaiting your entry as i am enthralled with your use of poetic form... i am just starting to comprehend it,,, but i have found inspiration in your page.....

TC said...

I can't help but feel a little bit sorry for the fish, even as I was rooting for the fishermen to get what they came for. That balance is tough to keep.

Michelle Johnson said...

Beautiful imagery as always. Keep up the good work.

Michelle

Bone said...

"Caught" also made me think of fish, but I went another direction. Always look forward to reading your 3WW haiku.

Crafty Green Poet said...

very evocative!