Wednesday, October 10, 2007

Gusty

3 Word Wednesday: Initial. Knock. Weather.

bamboo windchime knocks
winter weather's initials
scratched on my front door

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13 comments:

RomanceWriter said...

What a cool poem! Your words and the images brought to mind made me feel the chill of winter in my bones.

Brian said...

very nice. there really is something about sounds which announce the arrival of change

paisley said...

perfect haiku fr the gray gloomy northern california winters day we are having.....

irving said...

Perfect haiku for the turn of the seasons, and we also have a chime that sings with the autumn wind and the falling of leaves :)

Ya Haqq!

tumblewords said...

Brrr! Lovely haiku, lovely!

sister AE said...

Oh, wow! We were on the same wavelength with the prompt words. I like the way yours flows.

Truefaith1963 said...

Very clever! I must learn about haiku...

Clare said...

I adore the sound of bamboo windchimes -- very cool. Beautiful haiku.

UL said...

That was lovely...

Michelle Johnson said...

Beautiful, as always but, too cold for me.

Michelle

Bone said...

I also felt the wind and the chill while reading this.

TC said...

I don't know that I'm ready to start thinking of winter yet: brrrr!

P.S. Sorry it took me so long to get to this: I just wrote mine tonight and I don't typically read other's before I post my own :)

Cloudscome said...

I can hear those windchimes knocking...

Very nice haiku!