Wednesday, November 14, 2007

Bride

For 3 Word Wednesday: Icy. Pause. Train.

pausing to straighten
the train of her wedding gown
sweep of icy snow

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9 comments:

Christy said...

this paints a lovely picture of a winter wedding. Enjoyed!

paisley said...

he's marrying an ice princess.... lucky guy.....

tumblewords said...

I like the way your words can be used to present different images. Layers in haiku...

TC said...

I shouldn't have read Paisley's comment because now I can't think about anything but how I'm laughing at that.

I never wanted a winter wedding, but in a way, I think it might truly be peaceful and wonderful.

Jujee said...

you've captured the moment very well.

Truefaith1963 said...

Lovely image!!
You Haiku writers are all so clever.

Fledgling Poet said...

What a beautiful visual! Very good. :~)

Bone said...

That would be my luck, snow on my wedding day.

On second thought, I do love snow.

Michelle Johnson said...

I couldn't have that beautiful winter wedding because I don't like the cold. But, your haiku captured the moment well. Keep up the good work.