Friday, November 09, 2007

Left and Right

For Sunday Scribblings' prompt.

The road only looks
as though it forks. Beyond sight
the branches rejoin.

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11 comments:

TMTW said...

It is a beautiful haiku.

Anonymous said...

Concise substance - the triumph of a good haiku.

thefirecat said...

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(that was me, giving my classic poem-hurts-my-brain-it's-so-good blink.)

Anonymous said...

excellent and pithy wisdom :)
You go, haiku girl :)

Ya Haqq!

sister AE said...

lovely

Tumblewords: said...

Nice haiku! I'm sure it's right!

Whitesnake said...

Choice!

Lesley said...

Neat wee haiku which has drawn a whole load of pictures for my mind.

Anonymous said...

Haiku ROCKS!!

Great one for the prompt!! :D

Anonymous said...

I love this...esp. the rejoining bit.

Patois42 said...

Gorgeous haiku. Wonderful take on the prompt.