A collaborative poem generated by myself and Christopher Luna, at the OSPA picnic yesterday, in response to a writing exercise provided by Steve and Constance...
My God showed them off at the Creation Derby
as if they were angels,
lifting up the sky
to reveal giraffes
with beehive hairdos
I remember feeling short
and secretly wishing I'd hidden
from sight:
a beautiful parrot flew
just below my chin.
My lover showed them off at Dubuque
as if they were racehorses,
lifting up tired, broken legs
to reveal shattered skulls bedecked
with black diamonds.
I remember feeling nothing
and secretly wishing I'd escaped
from Turtle Mountain:
In a desperate
bid for significance
we had the bright idea
to tie the animals
back legs together,
black diamonds bound to
beehive hairdos
hobbled under a high yellow sky
while the peak of Turtle Mountain exploded
with the wings of thousands of parrots.
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Monday, August 30, 2010
Turtle Mountain Picnic
Thursday, August 26, 2010
White Walls

White walls against dark green shade,
branch bending over wrought-iron rails
frame figures in imagined parade.
House hidden in deep forest glade,
whispering secrets, old retold tales
from white walls against dark green shade
what hands built you, what footsteps made
these steps of slate, the twining trails
that frame figures in imagined parade?
They left long ago, but memories stayed
embedded along with the deep-driven nails
in the white walls against dark green shade--
supporting portraits in the wide-arched arcade,
gallery of ghosts in paint-traced details,
framed figures in imagined parades.
Ivory embroidery on emerald brocade,
jade ocean graced by far-racing sails,
white walls against dark green shade
framing figures in imagined parade.
--image courtesy of Magpie Tales
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Wednesday, August 25, 2010
Green Acorns
scattered on the sidewalk
early harbingers of autumn
scarred by squirrel teeth.
Unripe fruit is bitter,
curses the branch that let it fall too soon
to lie rotting in the rain.
No green stem sprouts from
the unready seed, but this poem
curls up like a brown leaf.
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Just Because It's Right
3 Word Wednesday: Abstain. Halo. Prayer. A good set of words for Ramadan.
make daily prayers
abstain from food and drink
expect no halo
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Monday, August 23, 2010
Nail Song
I grabbed me a nail and I set it on the wood
and the nail said "Lord, this had better be good
Lord, this had better be good."
I picked up the hammer and I went to hit the nail
and the nail said "Lord, I would rather be in jail
Lord, I would rather be in jail."
I swung the hammer down and I hit it on the head
and the nail cried "Lord, I would rather I was dead
Lord, I would rather I was dead!"
I pounded that nail and I hammered it deep
and the nail said "Lord, I wish you would let me sleep
Lord, I think I'm going to sleep."
The storm rolled in and it blew all night
and the nails said "Lord, but we're holding on tight
Lord, but we're holding on tight!"
The sun came out, it was hot all day
and the nails said "Lord, for a little bit of shade
Lord, for a little bit of shade."
Yes, the man with the hammer thinks he's the boss
but it's nails that held the thief on the cross,
it's nails that held the thief on the cross.
--for Big Tent's prompt about something you did with your hands.
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Sunday, August 22, 2010
Online and upcoming
qarrtsiluni has posted "A Date with Ben Franklin" and the next issue of Barefoot Muse, which should be up by the end of the month, will include "Up"-- both accompanied by sound files.
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Monday, August 16, 2010
Deep-Dish Pineapple Upside-Down Cake
She put the deep-dish
pineapple upside-down cake
in to bake; went to blow-dry her hair
and moisten her skin.
Outside in the summer heat
water streamed from a hose
into pots full of silk plants.
Then she got in her car
reset the odometer to all zeroes
and drove off leaving the cake to scorch
the pots to overflow
the blow-dryer to burn the house down.
--for Big Tent's wordle prompt.
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Thursday, August 12, 2010
Deathwatch Beetle

Your elbows are thick with rust
and stiff, as if you'd been
a tennis pro for way too long.
Every night when people are asleep
you can hear the creaks and groans
of all the joints in your body
and weird gurgles in the pipes. Sometimes
banging. The furnace still works
but the radiators leak
and don't heat up the way they used to.
Pressure fluctuates and there are
random surges of hot and cold water.
Visible rust and hidden corrosion,
flow constricted, backing up in eddies
and the furnace ticking over in the basement—
sound they used to call
the deathwatch beetle.
--image courtesy of Magpie Tales
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Massacre at Gothregor
If you've never read any of the Kencyr books by Pat Hodgell, you're missing a real treat. Also, this poem won't make a whole lot of sense to you.
Ganth Grey Lord
grim he went riding
High in the White Hills
the hard-handed lord
Trace now the tangled
if I tell this tale
Kinzi Keen-eyed
stood long listening
Walls guarded women
fighting in far-distant lands
that kept Knorth fed.
knowing stern need
Lacking steel and strong arms
As well be warded
Night fell. No warning
creeping and gliding
Assassins, unseen but for
cut throats in corridors
Bashtiri breath-stealers'
bloodying maiden breasts
No hoydens, Highborn
knees knotted tightly
Fleeing was futile
no freedom for limbs
still paying the price for
No Senethar, sisters
Down in a dark hall
seek out the safety
Beautiful Aerulan
clutches a child's hand
Above, at the doorway
Kinzi lies killed
Sweet pale blooms
concealment and comfort
A woven hanging
moon-garden entrance
Aerulan invites
her death distracts them
Cut down like corn
Ashes blew black
Knorth's men, maddened
drinking full deep
Under her home's halls
last Knorth woman
Ambush scattered
Grey Lord Ganth
never returned
grasped exile gladly
his sister lived
prey for the prowler
Formidable foes
bought the Bashtiri,
to kill the Knorth.
haunt the wide halls
Who kens old quarrels
Who now will whisper
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Wednesday, August 11, 2010
Leveraged Buyout
3 Word Wednesday: Joke. Leverage. Remedy
remedy for debt:
try to leverage a buyout
it's a bitter joke
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Tuesday, August 10, 2010
Candles for Ramadan

I lit a candle under the new moon and was proud
of how bright it burned. The full moon
swallowed my tiny flame without a trace.
Even the hawkmoths
who haunted my window with such passion
in dark nights, abandoned my candle
for sky-borne glory.
The moon at the end of the month grows thin
devouring its own light. Forsaken moths wander the air
searching for the silver dust of midmonth.
Ramadan burns flesh as flame burns wax. Souls
circle the candles of the Nights of Power
on private miraj.
New moon leaves us famished for brilliance
that swallows our souls as the moon
swallows my candle.
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Monday, August 09, 2010
My new socks
Susan sent me the most awesome pair of socks.
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Monday, August 02, 2010
"Call me Ishmael"
We'd been at sea for far too long.
I don't mean the ocean—the corrosive
fluid of a man's obsession
was what upheld the Pequod's keel.
We were adrift, out of sight
of all landmarks, home and family,
history, religion, any sense
of our own lives' geography or heading.
We were like drowning men or captives.
Some acquiesced. Some were unwilling.
Some swallowed the fanatic's dose.
Your age would call our ship
a floating Jonestown. Each man aboard
was marked for death, corpses adrift
in a wooden coffin.
All round us whale-spouts arose
like sheaves of sprouting wheat
we said. What did we know of wheat?
A landsman's image mouthed by sailors
sinking in unadmitted desperation. The sun
blazed down on trackless liquid wastes.
Nothing lay ahead except the deadly reckoning
wrapped in a milk-white hide
like hull-breaking rocks in fog or surf.
Call me Ishmael, miraculously delivered
by no virtue, but by design: one should be left
to tell this tale.
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