These words I'm saying so much begin to lose meaning:
existence, emptiness, mountain, straw: words
and what they try to say swept
out the window, down the slant of the roof.
Jelaluddin Rumi, trans. Coleman Barks
Kulliyat-e Shams #950
Atop the mountain,
a hut of straw.
It has one window,
tight-thatched roof.
A barren existence
in windswept emptiness!
Come to the window,
look out on emptiness.
Here at the world's roof,
atop this mountain,
the wind blows straws
over the edge of existence.
We'll shelter under any roof,
clinging to existence
beneath some mountain...
Turning away from windows,
fearing emptiness,
clutching at straws.
Existence. Emptiness.
Mountain. Straw.
Window. Roof.
Saturday, December 24, 2005
Sestina, Inspired By Rumi
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2 comments:
loved this work,
amazingly well done..
"
And what is existence?
Just a window
into a world made of straw.
Beneath it, emptiness."
very nice..
Wow. You chose one of the most difficult forms, and managed it quite well. I'm impressed.
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