An exercise I was given at a poetry workshop this weekend: Complete the following similes; use one to write a poem. The simile here was: "He entered the cave like..."
He entered the cave
like an atheist creeping into church--
scoffing, reverent, nerves on edge.
"It's just a hole in the ground."
At the edge of the flashlight's beam
figures beckoned, half-human, half-animal
half-silhouettes in black and ochre.
In the silent heart of earth they whispered
You will never understand us, nor explain
away the mystery we are.
Sunday, October 22, 2006
Lascaux
Labels:
free verse,
poetry
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