Any hand can make an impression
on the skin of the world; it wrinkles easily.
Deep work is different.
Spiderweb cracks in the hardest stone
yield to a tap
and water gushes out into the desert:
that’s not deep work, but the trees that grow
by the new spring will send down taproots
hundreds of feet into the earth. That’s deep work,
splitting rocks in the endless dark
drawing up minerals to meet the sun.
Deep work isn’t fast.
In a thousand years there’ll be a forest here.
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Monday, October 29, 2007
Deep Work
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free verse,
poetry
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I enjoyed this one, Tiel.
Nice bend on the concepts of depth and time. You got me thinking for sure.
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I had never looked at deep work from this perspective.
thanks for sharing
wise poem, well written. Excellent
Deep. Yes, it is. And the bend in time is nicely done!
Awesome first line! I like a poem that makes me think. Good job! ~Linda
Any hand can make an impression
on the skin of the world; it wrinkles easily
This poem opens beautifully and carries through..
The first two lines are great, it's not possible to stop reading at that point. Where you go from there is pretty nice too.
Succinct, direct & wise. A fine poem.
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