For those with ears to listen,
God's voice echoes through the spiral chambers of the world
like surf through an empty shell.
Or is it that the world
is the listening ear of God--
whorled like a snail, the cochlea?
Then let my heart be the skin of a drum
for the drum speaks when struck
but when left alone,
it listens.
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Friday, October 05, 2007
Drum, Shell, Heart
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free verse,
poetry
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7 comments:
Lovely idea, beautifully articulated. A kind of abstract thought present with great delicacy and precision. True poetry.
So very lovely!
Warmly,
Baraka
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Salamaat,
sigh..I want to be the skin of a drum too :)
Lovely poem, wonderful images.
I love the ending.
Thanks for the poem.
The last paragraph really intrigues me!!
Really cool. And true; I used to play the drums.
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