Today's 3 Word Wednesday seems remarkably appropriate to the date: Phone. Stumbled. Windy.
man clutching cell phone
stumbled along windy path
among leaning graves
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Wednesday, October 31, 2007
Lost in the Cemetery
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14 comments:
Like the too modern image of the cell phone in the timeless cemetry
I like the sense of foreboding in this piece- its like the start of a terrifying story.
I am left to wonder what the guy stumbled on in this windy pathway. It wasn't a dead body was it? Nice Halloween Haiku. Keep up the good work.
Have a nice day.
Michelle
We thought similar it seems! But your haiku has so much more power.
Nice Halloween atmosphere - Haiku is such a clever form but I haven't had the nerve to try it!!
VERY atmospheric! Great!
~S
Well-written, scary. Lots of story packed in those three short lines!
Love the contrast of old/new... your words become timeless.
Wonderful image!
Mad Kane
What would he be doing there amongst the graves? Makes you think of a possible illicit rendezvous. =)
I thought the words for 3WW were perfect too! Nice poem.
I definitely felt like this fit the Halloween "haunting" spirit!
Nice haiku :) I liked the rather unique use of "windy" in this one.
With this and that the poem takes on a whole new significance.
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