3 Word Wednesday: Afford. Cigarette. Dim.
in dim-lit back rooms
gamblers chainsmoke cigarettes
they cannot afford
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Wednesday, November 28, 2007
Bad Habits
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12 comments:
So short and says so much about so many things
I agree with Pia ..short but boy what it say is so much
now that was nice... short and sweet....
You told a very complete story in just three short lines. Impressive.
long story short and truth in haiku!
Well stated.
beautiful!!
eloquent and succinct!
interesting observation.
interesting observation.
oh goodness, that was great...
I agree with the others. I think "afford" had at least a little to do with why I never smoked or became a gambler.
You captured this scene so well. Makes me glad I am not a gambler because I wouldn't like the smell of the room. Keep up the good work.
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