3 Word Wednesday: Approach. Bottle. Smooth.
unbroken bottle
floats in smooth-running water
approaching rapids
Wednesday, January 30, 2008
Smooth-Running Water
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10 comments:
I think it will make it through.
Rose
xo
Questioning....will the rapids be the end or just a beginning of another journey?
Very nice
Deep. The poem, not the water. :-)
It is interesting that using unbroken to describe the bottle would seem to imply that all bottles end up broken at some point. Definitely a loss of innocence poem if ever I saw one.
Somehow, I'm taking this personally - nice job with several interpretations and layers in the eddies.
excellent ku...the best of the best..it is a ku korect? *smiling*
a well painted picture
agree, good picture.
...still sealed after all this time,
the message still dry inside
I can't help but wonder if it made it.
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