3 Word Wednesday: Awkward. Kitchen. Obsessed.
obsessed and homeless
standing awkwardly in line
at the soup kitchen
Wednesday, January 16, 2008
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9 comments:
Oh thats a good one!
Great use of the words
INcredible.....from the title to the wonderful application of the words into the 3 short lines. Very moving.
Penelope Anne
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Wow, this haiku packs a doozy of a punch, and the words couldn't be more perfectly suited. Masterful work!
Ouch. Provocative 3 lines!
The title really make the haiku. Without it the tone would have been much different. Excellent!
powerful image you painted here
very moving
This seems like you really bring their feelings alive... I've always wondered if there wasn't some awkwardness and shame, or if it just became second nature.
moving in its simplicity of emotions and words....
Really superb.
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