3 Word Wednesday: Awkward. Kitchen. Obsessed.
obsessed and homeless
standing awkwardly in line
at the soup kitchen
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First Monday 10-11pm, KBOO FM
Wider Window Poetry: bringing you voices you may not have heard from places you may not have been.
Tiel Ansari hosts readings and conversations with local and regional poets, and also reads poetry by writers from elsewhere in time and space.
9 comments:
Oh thats a good one!
Great use of the words
INcredible.....from the title to the wonderful application of the words into the 3 short lines. Very moving.
Penelope Anne
http://wannabeawritersomeday.blogspot.com/2008/01/3ww-volume-3.html
Wow, this haiku packs a doozy of a punch, and the words couldn't be more perfectly suited. Masterful work!
Ouch. Provocative 3 lines!
The title really make the haiku. Without it the tone would have been much different. Excellent!
powerful image you painted here
very moving
This seems like you really bring their feelings alive... I've always wondered if there wasn't some awkwardness and shame, or if it just became second nature.
moving in its simplicity of emotions and words....
Really superb.
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