Sunday Scribblings' prompt: Fridge space.
cold space
here we are in cold space
glass walls on a steel grid
low-heat lighting
plastic drawers built into walls
cold space
behind an energy-efficient door
stainfree fabrics
modular open-plan
movable shelving, relocatable floors
cold space
tired of living in cold space
when i die don’t put me
in cold space
Thursday, February 07, 2008
cold space
Labels:
free verse,
poetry
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16 comments:
"movable shelving, relocatable floors"
How can such utilitarian language sound so eloquent?
Kudos, and great take on "fridge space".
I like it, gave me the shivers. Very well written.
VERY GOOD ... shuddering, real, excellent! Thank YOU!
A hot post about cold space :-)
Wonderful.
So many meanings here! Very "cool" metaphor!
I particularly liked the "energy efficient door".
Beautiful write!
Smiles and Light
A cool 'build' of the prompt! :)
Cool.
:)
Too Cooool! Loved this!
Awesome! This is cool, on so many levels. lol Great job! ;o)
I consistently admire your work because you do get us to think at so many levels. I'm so glad I keep coming back!
I agree, no cold place for me when I die either! Give me lots of soft, fuzzy blankets.
Very well written
Awesome! An appliance turned poetic.
great post to the prompt...
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