Wednesday, March 05, 2008

Black Feather

3 Word Wednesday: Rest. Sidewalk. Twice.

glossy black feather
resting on the hot sidewalk
nearby crow caws twice

9 comments:

Sherry said...

excellent...I can see this...I can feel this...I can hear it!

Unknown said...

why does the crow caw twice?

Unknown said...

Very nice imagry, powerful play of the words.
Penelope Anne
http://cafeendofuniverse.blogspot.com/2008/03/3ww-lxxvi-when-sidewalk-ends.html

paisley said...

first of bravo on the publishing of your compilation...

and of course lovely haiku... do you think he may have been calling his feather home????

Tumblewords: said...

Congratulations on your recent publication!! Wonderful.
This is a lovely set of words that snapshot a piece of time. Visual and vibrant - haunting, too.

Anonymous said...

I like the way your words leads the minds-eye around the picture, from the feather to the crow almost out of frame.

TC said...

His... or those of a lost mate?

Bone said...

Congratulations on the compilation! There's nothing quite like seeing your words in ink.

WriterKat said...

beautiful!